Persuasive Paragraph

         

            EED’s charity concert must be one of charity concert that you have to visit. The first, we can see from the social reason. When you visit this event it means you help anyone out there who need our help, especially orphan children. Your ticket payment will be distributed to some orphanages in Singaraja. The second advantage is you will find various food and drink sold by student of English Education Department. You don’t have to be worry about the taste because they sell the  high quality food and drink there.  There will be some performances from the student of EED, one of them is Arabia Sexy  Dance. So what are you waiting for, come and visit us at Kampus Bawah Undiksha on Monday 23^th start from 7 pm till drop. Mark your calendar!

Cause and Effect Paragraph

                 

                There are several causes why people join a gang.  The big reason is the sense of family. Young people might feel  that they don’t receive enough support and attention at home, so they try to escape a negative life at home and look for unconditional support from the others. The second reason is because they need or money. Since they need food or money, then they use their affection to make a profit through illegal activities with their gang. The last reason why people join gang is to make them look ”cool’. Because some gang have mastered the art of manipulation to attract potential recruit. so it will make people have a desire to join the gang. Those are several reasons why people join a gang.

Compare and Contrast Paragraph

Import Dog

Local Dog

                

                     

              There are several things I can refer that local and import dog are different. The first one we can see from their daily food. Import dog needs special food, while local dog doesn’t need any special food. We can see that people usually feed their local dog based on what they eat every day. The second is based on their endurance. Import dog is easier to get sick that’s why we should give vaccination every 3 months. Local dog is much stronger, and doesn’t need any vaccination. The third is based on the treatment we give to them. Import dog need special treatment, we should bring them to the pet care, dog stylist, and etc., while local dog  doesn’t need special treatment, they even can walk alone and be back again to their boss. Those are the differences between import dog and local dog.

Narative Paragraph

            

                

       Once upon a time there was a little girl named Heny who lived with her  old grandmother near the jungle. They used to go the jungle to take some firewood and sold it to the nearest traditional market in their village. Heny and her grandmother were loved each other like mother and daughter, but one thing that made Heny so curious was her grandmother really like to use a long white dress and combed her hair slowly while singing a sympathetic song every Thursday night. One day they, went to the forest and it was rain at the time so they had to stay at the forest for longer time.  On the afternoon, finally the rain stopped and they could back again to their home. On the way home, Heny realized something when she looked at her grandmother to ask her something. Her grandmother face changed into pale face and actually she walked on the air without stepped the land. Heny was so surprised and scared. She screamed loudly and ran so fast. After 12 years together Heny didn’t realize that her grandmother is a ghost and she still couldn’t believe that she has been living with a ghost as her grandmother.